I have been brainstorming a revised ending to my WIP. I decided my original ending was too easy, too lucky. New ending is blocked out but not written yet. It is less 'wow! lookee that! ' More logical, I think, and more time away from danger for my couple to hammer out their HEA. Before that, it was written with four adults crammed into a little transport--really not good for romance!

2 comments:
sounds like you're making some real progress. keep up the good work!
Sounds promising. It's great that you could step back and see where to improve the work.
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